Hey @maxrisermusic,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'One day', here are our thoughts π₯
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @maxrisermusic, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'One day', here are our thoughts π₯ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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