Hush (22:55)
I put my life on standby I was winning by a landslide You ever seen a beat get eaten By a man live? You tune in to my IG, I'll show you why I can't lie, Baddies in my DM, I want em, that's a damn lie. I fly solo came in the world dolo Labels beating on my door, They asking me for promo. Look I been a boss, Get crossed I'm “A.I”-ing, Flying off the jump, I'm Jordan I'm stage diving. I’m a club packa, My nine'll stay firin', Beefing like Lover Boy And Donda on an island. I'm shooting my shot with Kim while Ye stay wildin', Paparazzi getting off shots, That's paid timing. I'm a diamond in da ruff, I’on dine em I’on cuff em, Splash em in they face, Kelly Rowland with the cup when the doors open up, We don't speak, keep it hush. When the doors open up, We don’t speak, hush
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I put my life on standby I was winning by a landslide You ever seen a beat get eaten By a man live? You tune in to my IG, I'll show you why I can't lie, Baddies in my DM, I want em, that's a damn lie. I fly solo came in the world dolo Labels beating on my door, They asking me for promo. Look I been a boss, Get crossed I'm “A.I”-ing, Flying off the jump, I'm Jordan I'm stage diving. I’m a club packa, My nine'll stay firin', Beefing like Lover Boy And Donda on an island. I'm shooting my shot with Kim while Ye stay wildin', Paparazzi getting off shots, That's paid timing. I'm a diamond in da ruff, I’on dine em I’on cuff em, Splash em in they face, Kelly Rowland with the cup when the doors open up, We don't speak, keep it hush. When the doors open up, We don’t speak, hush
this is a fire masterclass bro definitely keep doing your thing
Hey @superdemonx_x, We're gonna review your track 'Hush (22:55)'. Let's get it! Could hardly tell you were improvising there, really impressive! 🧠 Insane delivery on this, you're floating on that beat! 🎆 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Dope recording, nicely done. ✔ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Good 💛
what you talking about Delivery: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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