Hey @psycheznplasma,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'homelessness and fat cats. poem by daryll smith', here are our thoughts π₯
Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take.
Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro!
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
I Love this beat dude! The mix could be better but the content is heartfelt. #Honestreview
Bars: Nice π
Delivery: On point π―
Impression: Dope π₯
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really rap based on my own experience
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Hey @psycheznplasma, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'homelessness and fat cats. poem by daryll smith', here are our thoughts π₯ Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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I Love this beat dude! The mix could be better but the content is heartfelt. #Honestreview Bars: Nice π Delivery: On point π― Impression: Dope π₯
I can feel this I kno where this comes from Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
thank you so much I'm not a rapper I'm a poet that means another luv bro
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