when you said "I know you aint Superman" in the hook after you shoulda said "but can you be my Leowise Lane" still good how u had it too
Bars: Nice 🌟
Delivery: Nice 🌟
Impression: Nice 🌟
Hey @dcy21yyht9,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'SouthsidebabyPainAway'! 💥
Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one.
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. 🌠
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼
You've got a lot of flair and creativity, we love this!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @dcy21yyht9, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'SouthsidebabyPainAway'! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. 🌠 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 You've got a lot of flair and creativity, we love this! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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