Ok first off if you want to enter a contest it's best to make a song with a hook and verses, this one's abit short. The vocals are abit tucked away behind the beat so the beat over powers it which makes it hard to hear the words. The vocals need the whole package, EQ, compression ect. And it would sound better if you enunciate your words better and make them more clear, and try put a bit more attitude or maybe melody into your voice. No hate bro all love, literally every thing I've just said is all things that I struggled with majorly but once I worked on them it made a huuuuge difference to the quality of my music π― Hope you don't take offence bro just trying to give you advice π
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Ok first off if you want to enter a contest it's best to make a song with a hook and verses, this one's abit short. The vocals are abit tucked away behind the beat so the beat over powers it which makes it hard to hear the words. The vocals need the whole package, EQ, compression ect. And it would sound better if you enunciate your words better and make them more clear, and try put a bit more attitude or maybe melody into your voice. No hate bro all love, literally every thing I've just said is all things that I struggled with majorly but once I worked on them it made a huuuuge difference to the quality of my music π― Hope you don't take offence bro just trying to give you advice π
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