On The Moon

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On The Moon

The lights The smoke There’s Drink everywhere Dressed not to provoke I’m dancing and you stare Might not have in underwear Might be tripping off a pair Of these 3.5 gram Mushrooms That I took and I’m aware The liquor in my sprite My fuck on you tonight I feeling free so give me pipe Little drunk a little high Need some stress free in your life You can get it while Faded So come closer I don’t bite I’m on the Shroom Take me to you I’m on the moon When I’m with you Wetty wetty I been in incognito Lately Chatting reacting Your touch amazing Give dosage in a daily daily The lights The smoke There’s Drink everywhere Dressed not to provoke I’m dancing and you stare Might not have in underwear Might be tripping off a pair Of these 3.5 gram Mushrooms That I took and I’m aware The liquor in my sprite My fuck on you tonight I feeling free so give me pipe Little drunk a little high Need some stress free in your life You can get it while Faded So come closer I don’t bite

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4 years ago

The lights The smoke There’s Drink everywhere Dressed not to provoke I’m dancing and you stare Might not have in underwear Might be tripping off a pair Of these 3.5 gram Mushrooms That I took and I’m aware The liquor in my sprite My fuck on you tonight I feeling free so give me pipe Little drunk a little high Need some stress free in your life You can get it while Faded So come closer I don’t bite I’m on the Shroom Take me to you I’m on the moon When I’m with you Wetty wetty I been in incognito Lately Chatting reacting Your touch amazing Give dosage in a daily daily The lights The smoke There’s Drink everywhere Dressed not to provoke I’m dancing and you stare Might not have in underwear Might be tripping off a pair Of these 3.5 gram Mushrooms That I took and I’m aware The liquor in my sprite My fuck on you tonight I feeling free so give me pipe Little drunk a little high Need some stress free in your life You can get it while Faded So come closer I don’t bite

4 years ago

Hi there @sorrynotsorry98, Here's some feedback on your track 'On The Moon', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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Yoooooooooooooo Keep going Nice vibes decent sound

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4 years ago

wasn't done reviewing lmfao

4 years ago

Okay. take reverb off main vocals. keep it on your adlibs when you start to sing. 0:46 Impression: Perfect 💯

4 years ago

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