On The Moon
Sorrynotsorry32 Plays
•07 Jun 2022
The lights The smoke There’s Drink everywhere Dressed not to provoke I’m dancing and you stare Might not have in underwear Might be tripping off a pair Of these 3.5 gram Mushrooms That I took and I’m aware The liquor in my sprite My fuck on you tonight I feeling free so give me pipe Little drunk a little high Need some stress free in your life You can get it while Faded So come closer I don’t bite I’m on the Shroom Take me to you I’m on the moon When I’m with you Wetty wetty I been in incognito Lately Chatting reacting Your touch amazing Give dosage in a daily daily The lights The smoke There’s Drink everywhere Dressed not to provoke I’m dancing and you stare Might not have in underwear Might be tripping off a pair Of these 3.5 gram Mushrooms That I took and I’m aware The liquor in my sprite My fuck on you tonight I feeling free so give me pipe Little drunk a little high Need some stress free in your life You can get it while Faded So come closer I don’t bite
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Hi there @sorrynotsorry98, Here's some feedback on your track 'On The Moon', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yoooooooooooooo Keep going Nice vibes decent sound
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