Hey @davidbou,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'rtr'! ๐ฅ
Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! ๐ง
Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic.
You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX.
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @davidbou, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'rtr'! ๐ฅ Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! ๐ง Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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