Hey @waterworld.7236010,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'remember and forgot', here are our thoughts π₯
Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. π§
Spend a little more time on developing your rhymes to really elevate your songs.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
Dope work with the effects, nicely done. β
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @waterworld.7236010, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'remember and forgot', here are our thoughts π₯ Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. π§ Spend a little more time on developing your rhymes to really elevate your songs. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ Dope work with the effects, nicely done. β Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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I wan hear more from you keep working bro β π₯π€§