Hey @jamilthigpen,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Oldies SWAY_1'! π₯
Your bars are good, keep it up! π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ
Good choice of beat! πΌ
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
The vocal samples in the beginning of the track really added a strong element to your song and helped layer it with your verse and the rnb hook.. very well structured track for your first post I definitely look forward to hearing more from you I can tell you definitely an artist with lots of potential and something to sayπ―πPlease return the favor when you have time and check me out maybe we could Collab on a track in the future just hollaπ΄ππ―
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Hey @jamilthigpen, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Oldies SWAY_1'! π₯ Your bars are good, keep it up! π Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Good choice of beat! πΌ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
The vocal samples in the beginning of the track really added a strong element to your song and helped layer it with your verse and the rnb hook.. very well structured track for your first post I definitely look forward to hearing more from you I can tell you definitely an artist with lots of potential and something to sayπ―πPlease return the favor when you have time and check me out maybe we could Collab on a track in the future just hollaπ΄ππ―
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