Explore (13:28)

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I download the app Just to see what I could do with it, I upload a beat Now I really found some use with it, Explored through my thoughts Now my bars made a ruler fit, Brighter than ever What I saw like a solar eclipse, Listen to the flow Never thought that I had it, Practice makes perfect Came here like magic, Cleaner than ever So far from a static, This should get me forward Instead of being in a tragic.

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Daylan Gallegos

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4 years ago

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

pagemoney215

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Certifide Theboss

4 years ago

ok man keepnpushing . Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Good 💛

D.R.O.B - DLS

4 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Jerrod Arvel

4 years ago

👍🏾 Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @daylangallegos, Thank you for sharing 'Explore (13:28)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Mikey Devious

4 years ago

keep working on your style boss you will get it Bars: Good 💛 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Good 💛

Daylan Gallegos

Author

4 years ago

thank you so much

Carron Anderson

28 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

jflames.4996

4 months ago