RIP Brother

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lost another one tonite this shit aint right let the gun take his life leaving a hole like a knife. pulled the trigger now his skull is disfigured. its like everyone around me is dieing while i just be flying burning down this loud pack not trying to look back but i feel like my world is under attack. Everyone wants to have a good time but at what cost drowning in my feelings dealing with this.loss. bet yo ass you can guarantee ill come out.like.a boss full throttle hit the noss. insipring rock star rap trapper saw ye hoe mite kidnap her pay her before never after obey my commands call me master. death rates so high disaster hit the noss vroom vroom go faster focusing on my mental health always working on my wealth. Jp and killerbee smoking on this tree....welcome to.my abyss full.of loss and sufferimg hate me break me take me erase me ahhh. pop the bottle pull the trigfer put ur life on the line no? how you figure all this loss trying not to lose my mind....always working on my grind got to stay focused cant waste my time. welcome to my abyss full of loss and suffering take me break me erase me.....suicidal tendencies me and the grim reaper be enemies take all my friends from mes what the fuck is time all we have is memories just lost souls like waves in the seas till one day crash ur whole lifes smashed acting all rash got to move fast dont focus on the passed hit the noss make sure ur never last ill keep ur memorys alive and continue to strive make sure my family thrives. Grim reaoer out here taking lives i cant watch. no.more take my eyes killerbee in. disguise.,..i lost my mind space traveling all this weed got me unraveling call that a rap lay my noggin down recline time to take a nap...

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Killerbeeeeee

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4 years ago

🗣💪🏾K3️⃣Y❣🏳️‍🌈♓

4 years ago

rip brother 🔥👀 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @killerbeeeeee, Thank you for sharing 'RIP Brother' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're perfectly on beat with this, awesome! 🌠 You picked the perfect beat for this one, this sounds great. 🧨 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! 💜 We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Mrbigboss

4 years ago

NIce job bro this is awesome Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Ichiro B. Jordan

4 years ago

Putting your heart on the track 🙏🏽 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mcnasty

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Dajudge 🎭

4 years ago

fire bro Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯