What's up @dashawncampbell.7224124,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'I'm am dashawnc22 '! ๐ฅ
Your vocals sound fire, great recording on this!
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! ๐ค
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
you need to work on your structure of your music the sound and the quality and the lyrics
Bars: Can improve ๐
Delivery: Can improve ๐
Impression: Can improve ๐
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What's up @dashawncampbell.7224124, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'I'm am dashawnc22 '! ๐ฅ Your vocals sound fire, great recording on this! You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! ๐ค We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
cool cool ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ keep it up ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
I wan hear more from you keep working bro โ ๐คง๐ฅ
u need to work on your recording skills Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
bars are ๐ฅ work on delivery Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
you need to work on your structure of your music the sound and the quality and the lyrics Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐