Hey @dahealer,
We appreciate you sharing 'More Serious' with us! π₯
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @dahealer, We appreciate you sharing 'More Serious' with us! π₯ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π Great beat choice, really works with the track! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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