Explore (23:24)

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I download the app Just to see what I could do with it, I upload a beat Now I really found some use with it, Explored through my thoughts Now my bars made a ruler fit, Brighter than ever What I saw like a solar eclipse, Listen to the flow Never thought that I had it, Practice makes perfect Came here like magic, Cleaner than ever So far from a static, This should get me forward Instead of being in a tragic.

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Kelvin Dalton

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @kelvindalton, Thank you for sharing 'Explore (23:24)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. 🌠 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔ Make sure to remember your “why” when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

WaynnDikky

4 years ago

Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯

The Riddle Man

4 years ago

ok ok I'd say do longer 2-4 min. 7 7 8 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

🇭🇹🩸SmokeyDaOne🩸🇭🇹

4 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Perfect 💯

New Jack

4 years ago

just bad audio quality I would have giving you a better score Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯