Yo @kingraymoe,
It's time for us to take a look at '5.30.22'! ๐ฅ
Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. ๐ง
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
Good choice of beat! ๐ผ
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time!
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
mic placement is so important it's a great song overall the only thing I would say is focus on get your words out cleaner no disrespect young man you are definitely a true talent and will be a problem in the very near future
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Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
fresh Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Aye, your skilled. Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
good could use some minor improvements but it go .. Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Nice ๐
really good tone and Flow. Nice work bro
I wan hear more from you keep working bro ๐คงโ ๐ฅ
Yo @kingraymoe, It's time for us to take a look at '5.30.22'! ๐ฅ Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. ๐ง Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ Good choice of beat! ๐ผ Try improving your recording quality if you can. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Cool is a little potent but what youโre talking about none of that said yeah
mic placement is so important it's a great song overall the only thing I would say is focus on get your words out cleaner no disrespect young man you are definitely a true talent and will be a problem in the very near future