Hey @shamarberry,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'get off my shit ', here are our thoughts 💥
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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yeah
Bars: Good 💛 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Nice 🌟
I wan hear more from you keep working bro 🤧🔥✅
Hey @shamarberry, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'get off my shit ', here are our thoughts 💥 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
keep grinding young bull the flow there no cap