Come & Go (12:30:53)
I got the bars I got the cars I got everything you want baby if you want something just come in and meet me and you just something pumping like you’re Jumpin you already know I got the bars I don’t even know how to get all the cars because I’m just a broke boy but I’m not anymore because I used to live in Chicago with the hood rats you don’t know the both of wealth of love cause you’re just selfish and you don’t apologize for nothing I’m paying all the bills like it’s nothing I’m rushing True life because life is hard I’m thinking of committing suicide because it’s hard ever since you love me I’ve been paying all the bills like dollar bills like one dollar bills thinking of going back to Chicago with a hood rat making deals and buying drugs overdose.
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I got the bars I got the cars I got everything you want baby if you want something just come in and meet me and you just something pumping like you’re Jumpin you already know I got the bars I don’t even know how to get all the cars because I’m just a broke boy but I’m not anymore because I used to live in Chicago with the hood rats you don’t know the both of wealth of love cause you’re just selfish and you don’t apologize for nothing I’m paying all the bills like it’s nothing I’m rushing True life because life is hard I’m thinking of committing suicide because it’s hard ever since you love me I’ve been paying all the bills like dollar bills like one dollar bills thinking of going back to Chicago with a hood rat making deals and buying drugs overdose.
this is a nice beat and you matched it with a catchy flow good work bro
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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keep it up kid your flow is good Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Can improve 👏
Yo @lilredblue1952! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Come & Go (12:30:53)'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯⛽️⛽️⛽️🚀🚀🎶 nice job keep going g don’t give up