Hey @dakariharris,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'bri'! 💥
Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧
We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏
Good choice of beat! 🎼
The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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the first part was good the steve came in
I wan hear more from you keep working bro 🤧✅🔥
Hey @dakariharris, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'bri'! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
use that sexy voice of you're and own the next track. can hardly hear you on this one. go hard girl
LIT 🔥
Steve shut up