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Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'JUKE JONES$ ft Dub Fetti (DID IT)'! π₯
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What's up @b79pbyp1oc, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'JUKE JONES$ ft Dub Fetti (DID IT)'! π₯ We like the bars, well written! Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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