dam man i cant get enough of it
better watch who u fucking wit aurora
if we talking bout Dolla bills wit us u can double it
take mke the package and run with it
if you then ypu best not het caught
dont get put in a box
all my safes keep em locked
wanna leave better walk
my whole yesm dipped in sauce
caught em slipping watching tic tok
had to hit wit a criss cross
didnt tell em it was syck block
now my whole cities on a grid lock
if you dont wanna leave then its coo
when i go to sleep the city can move
how much did you think you would loose
been here
you been a victim of verbal) abuse
this is me is that you
Hey @carnellsmith!
Thanks for sharing 'Scream (10:03)' with us! 💥
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording.
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
reduce some of the Reverb and turn those vocals up. from what I can hear I can tell you got a dope flow. keep playing with the effects till you get the right sound and you'll definitely have that presence in your music. keep going hard bro good luck
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dam man i cant get enough of it better watch who u fucking wit aurora if we talking bout Dolla bills wit us u can double it take mke the package and run with it if you then ypu best not het caught dont get put in a box all my safes keep em locked wanna leave better walk my whole yesm dipped in sauce caught em slipping watching tic tok had to hit wit a criss cross didnt tell em it was syck block now my whole cities on a grid lock if you dont wanna leave then its coo when i go to sleep the city can move how much did you think you would loose been here you been a victim of verbal) abuse this is me is that you
Hey @carnellsmith! Thanks for sharing 'Scream (10:03)' with us! 💥 Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Great vibe man 👍🏻
reduce some of the Reverb and turn those vocals up. from what I can hear I can tell you got a dope flow. keep playing with the effects till you get the right sound and you'll definitely have that presence in your music. keep going hard bro good luck
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