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Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
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Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
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