knock the rust off
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Frozen in the passenger seat my thoughts go blank my mind skippin the beat my life memories featured like tracks playin in the black jeep while using my rhymes to define my makeup A soldier in life from sun up to sun down no frown when the bell sounds like champions under the lights its time to get down
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Wassup @musicislifeloveself, Thank you for sharing 'knock the rust off' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
just getting back into it be kind on the reviews