secrets

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I wrote you a song today proly write you another one later/wrote so much almost ran paper /at yo service yo personal waiter/bring it to you you like how I cater /screamin holin like u goin in labor/Makin plans like when we finally get a place we gon proly make some terrible neighbors/here we go again, Poin up the gin/ rollin up again tell u all my secrets..let me feel u in/ Out here on a mission I been tryna win writin goin hard broke a couple pens / callin you again textin u again/thought u got the message I ain't press send /slide thru so we can put one in the wind/ do this shit again this won't ever end

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Jaiil$on$waG

4 years ago

keep at iit 🎵🎶 you sounding good ✨🎉👌

LGK 👻⭐️

4 years ago

😎☀️🙌🏽🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Spaztic mind

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @bennibtrill, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'secrets'! 💥 We like the bars, well written! Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Benni Trill

Author

4 years ago

sumn basic..kinda rushed it for the contest.. check out my other work. the others are chopped n trilled by me too