Juicy (9:48:57 pm)

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The meaning of life and life to you Find somebody to love, lets make it worth it I wanna be the diamonds in your lights I wanna shine like the diamonds in your life  Pre-Chorus We are yours now We cover you with life  Chorus I play the game of livin life like a tropical breeze Baby, do you not feel loved, much I got one life, four wives, I keep it up I got one life, four wives, I keep it up  Verse 2 All of my sins, they will be forgiven This is what life will be I have been gone where a lot of my life have been Here is an island like the sea, there is no town  Pre-Chorus I feel alive, I feel better together Even feel better cause you came  Chorus I play the game of livin life like a tropical breeze Baby, do you not feel loved, much I got one life, four wives, I keep it up I got one life, four wives, I keep it up  Bridge I got to get away from the city life I need some adventure and a dream in a bottle  Chorus I play the game of livin life like a tropical breeze Baby, do you not feel loved, much I got one life, four wives, I keep it up I got one life, four wives, I keep it up

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Brad Motaz

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4 years ago

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6 months ago

good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @bradmotaz, We appreciate you sharing 'Juicy (9:48:57 pm)' with us! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

4 years ago

I feel like the vocals needed to be turned up just a tad very creative project keep working with that word play Juicy different kind of song it was great of though I hope to see you support me Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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8 days ago

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3 months ago

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8 months ago

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CaptheBeast

11 months ago

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