Paper Time

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my name lil ty scorned since I was born im hard headed never going to learn learn whats that? courts adjourned ass got burned 11/29 on paper my dad was a mason spoke about patience heart hurts laceration not worried bout no basics tired of being a plantiff recieving affadavits transpired being my own pharmacist no way for competence i miss you mama im sorry for the drama smokin on marijuana know yall are in nirvana lil ty on the beat his bitch isa freak pleasure she seek her knees be weak fucked her so hard right by the creek jus copped us 2 ounces of wax fresh pack police behind me light flashin not stoppin too busy gettin road top big glock she chokin on my cock ive lost a lot but ima go out fighting in my time of dyin please save your cries no more lies it was just my time

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TYLER that destroyer

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @tyler.7186654, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Paper Time', here are our thoughts 💥 Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 "I miss you mama I'm sorry for the drama.." - rate the flow in this section! Try switching up the flows to really take you to the next level! Taking inspiration from your favourite artists can also greatly develop your own artistic work Loving the beat selection, good ear! Dope vocal sample on this one! Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Firemurda

4 years ago

dope beat Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

✝️LEGENDARY LIGHTSHOW✝️⭐️

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Double Tha 4th

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Waxy Gordon

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥