Hey @rayastonishin,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Some Day', here are our thoughts π₯
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
Try experimenting with different levels of effects to see what works best.
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @rayastonishin, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Some Day', here are our thoughts π₯ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ Try experimenting with different levels of effects to see what works best. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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