First Take
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When i was 17 i taught myself just how to rap my dad think's im a nobody but i can't have that I got my insperation by mister Harry Mack He flips bars like i did cocaine yeah that's facts But let me talk a little bit about my life My momma kicked me out at 14 and that ain't right She said to focus on your life and build yourself a future If you fucking with weed friend's you better you better have a tutor But im a youngin and i dont know no better I stay puffin the blunt with my 420 sweater Right on the corner we chillin, yeah we talking and wishing Can't wait to find me a thick bitch so we can kick it Uhh
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When i was 17 i taught myself just how to rap my dad think's im a nobody but i can't have that I got my insperation by mister Harry Mack He flips bars like i did cocaine yeah that's facts But let me talk a little bit about my life My momma kicked me out at 14 and that ain't right She said to focus on your life and build yourself a future If you fucking with weed friend's you better you better have a tutor But im a youngin and i dont know no better I stay puffin the blunt with my 420 sweater Right on the corner we chillin, yeah we talking and wishing Can't wait to find me a thick bitch so we can kick it Uhh
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Hey @garthpearce, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'First Take', here are our thoughts π₯ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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