Wassup @lorkam,
Thank you for sharing 'Lor Kam - New Year New Me' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat! πΌ
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @lorkam, Thank you for sharing 'Lor Kam - New Year New Me' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat! πΌ Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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