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Hi @PurpHayes!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Secrets'! π₯
Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Great timing on this, you're hitting the beat really well! π
Yess, we are loving this beat choice! π§¨
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! π
This is a real smooth jam, the delivery is hitting hard and the track sounds authentic. The vocals on the hook sound really strained tho and the production generally could be cleand up a little!
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @PurpHayes! Welcome to our feedback of 'Secrets'! π₯ Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Great timing on this, you're hitting the beat really well! π Yess, we are loving this beat choice! 𧨠The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! π This is a real smooth jam, the delivery is hitting hard and the track sounds authentic. The vocals on the hook sound really strained tho and the production generally could be cleand up a little! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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