Hey @michaelbarksdale,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Comeback'! ๐ฅ
Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง
Try playin' around with different words to create the perfect rhyme scheme.
Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ
Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! ๐
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @michaelbarksdale, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Comeback'! ๐ฅ Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง Try playin' around with different words to create the perfect rhyme scheme. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! ๐ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
nice Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Great ๐
โ Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
๐ฅ๐ฅ HEAT FWM G NEW UP #DECEITFULFLOWLSK Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
CAKE ๐ฐ