Hitting up my line

Name: Hitting up my line
Description: Another women trying to get back with me but I'm a married man my lust for her is bad because she's so beautiful my wife in the other room but I end up blocking the women trying to call me.

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Another women trying to get back with me but I'm a married man my lust for her is bad because she's so beautiful my wife in the other room but I end up blocking the women trying to call me.

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Bruce Abbott

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4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi @bruceabbott.7168165! Welcome to our feedback of 'Hitting up my line '! 💥 Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

4 years ago

good work with your creativity the project definitely hit hard I love the way you put the lines together keep pushing hard with the lyrics and I hope to see you support some of my music Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Zamm

2 months ago

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O.T.3 CAMO

5 months ago

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SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

8 months ago

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Lil lost aka young menthol

10 months ago

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