What's up @dndversa,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'more loyal.'! π₯
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
Felt this one right here β€οΈ. Great rappers ain't afraid to rap about real shit! Respect!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @dndversa, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'more loyal.'! π₯ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Felt this one right here β€οΈ. Great rappers ain't afraid to rap about real shit! Respect! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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