life is hard I hope I make it

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life is hard I hope I make it

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across

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4 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

4 years ago

Dope lil bro 😎 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

4 years ago

yeah I make it nig Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

4 years ago

Great effort on being someone to change people's lifes by your words . keep up the good work. and just a little advise... if you practiced what you wrote down until you memorized the words it would have a more impact.

4 years ago

You got it dude! Keep at it, keep practicing, and don't stop! you got some serious potential! A couple of tips for you, number 1, back away from the mike, or if you're using your phone, put it on a dresser or a counter, and take one big step back, that way it won't be muffled! Number 2: practice with the music you want over and over and over till you know the rap by heart! When you can spit that rap in your sleep, you got it! Then go record that sucker! and Number 3!! Keep doing it! you got the making to be something! don't stop if you got yourself a dream!

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4 years ago

Hey @kingking.7049824, We appreciate you sharing 'life is hard I hope I make it ' with us! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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