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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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4 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

4 years ago

I definitely would like to see you write your own lyrics for your next track keep pushing very creative please support me and some of my music

your Rhymes could use better pacing with the instrumental also there's a lot of white noise here. try using some decent headphones and your recording quality will immediately increase. good luck with this. Hope to see what you have next

4 years ago

Hey @thelastog! Thanks for sharing 'first one' with us! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! This beat is working well for you! 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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