First of all let's bag away from the mic and calm down in front of the mic respect the mic you got the energy now let's do it the right way like a major artist and let's not play around, get a pen and a paper and take your time and write down the thoughts that you want to say you are young, I can hear it but I am not going to say you are horrible and I'm not going to say you cannot do it cuz you can. You just have to take the time little man you got the vision you got the idea you just don't know how to say it the right way look up to your favorite artists and remember five of their songs a piece and this will help you on your delivery
keep working on your flow Young G. you have good projection and try and proving you're recording quality and you'll be good to go. Can't wait to hear more keep pushing
Hey @brownomarion,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'yo'! ๐ฅ
Try to draw from personal experience when writin'. It'll give your bars a unique flavour.
Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
Good choice of beat! ๐ผ
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life!
Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin'
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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amazing I wish you the best in your musical career
i like it the lyrics to get a record machine or something else than I can hear you voice better ๐ good going ๐
First of all let's bag away from the mic and calm down in front of the mic respect the mic you got the energy now let's do it the right way like a major artist and let's not play around, get a pen and a paper and take your time and write down the thoughts that you want to say you are young, I can hear it but I am not going to say you are horrible and I'm not going to say you cannot do it cuz you can. You just have to take the time little man you got the vision you got the idea you just don't know how to say it the right way look up to your favorite artists and remember five of their songs a piece and this will help you on your delivery
keep working on your flow Young G. you have good projection and try and proving you're recording quality and you'll be good to go. Can't wait to hear more keep pushing
Hey @brownomarion, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'yo'! ๐ฅ Try to draw from personal experience when writin'. It'll give your bars a unique flavour. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Good choice of beat! ๐ผ The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐