Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @taramasenju, Thank you for sharing 'delete' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Tarama Senju

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.