Celestial

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#GK2022 #GKSTRESS #GKERRIEBOYZ #GK #ERRIEBOYZ #LIVINGUNDEAD #SURVIVE #CELESTIALGK a celestial being just bottom feedin off the top darkness seething common opposition seems like Im a god but needing knowledge talk me off the ledge Im honestly preaching knock me off my bed gods keepin secrets dark thoughts creepin got sparks to weaken lost cause Ive been speakin got pot but numbs the bleeding not like gauze could stop the leaking odd my flaws keep increasing whats wrong they keep seekin maybe my mind is leapin over mines that just deepin yellin and yellin demon screaming help em help em no you need to be leaving angels dyin everyone is fleeing get your shit together your a human being gotta live gotta live your a Green King dont be so down when You can achieve bliss switch that mood quick get that broom stick and get to the moon brick by brick itll be a challenge but you’ve proved it get past this stupid shit

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Green King

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @greenking! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Celestial '! 💥 Some woke bars on this one! 🙌 Nice rhyming too, we hear you! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. 👍 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Try switchin' up the flows to add some more variation on this one tho! 💯 Good choice of beat, really works here! 🎼 We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Try starting your raps a lil earlier in the song, seems to be a decent amount of empty space before you begin rappin' on this one! 🌟 Please share a track with you rapping so we can give proper feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

5 years ago

nice work with the creativity on the project you definitely came up with great energy green I hope to see you support me bro Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Meezy Fettachinni Dakaprio

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

(ABRB4B)KingS.o.S

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Big Balla

7 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

11 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥