Hey @officialjp.,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'the past ', here are our thoughts 💥
Jheez! This mix is perfect, you have a great mix between your vocals and the beat. ✅
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @officialjp., Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'the past ', here are our thoughts 💥 Jheez! This mix is perfect, you have a great mix between your vocals and the beat. ✅ Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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