definitely very different I like the technique it was a very passionate song and I like your lyrical poem play I hope to see you support my music
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Hey @fsdondeal,
We're gonna review your track 'FS Don Deal- Smile'. Let's get it!
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Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€
All the best,
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definitely very different I like the technique it was a very passionate song and I like your lyrical poem play I hope to see you support my music Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @fsdondeal, We're gonna review your track 'FS Don Deal- Smile'. Let's get it! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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