What's up @iAmYeetBoi,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'mysxlf '! π₯
We like the bars, well written! Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! π
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @iAmYeetBoi, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'mysxlf '! π₯ We like the bars, well written! Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! π Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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