Independent?

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I ain't texting no hoe I let her snap me I've never been one to blow smoke so just ask me baby girl this ain't no joke, am I laughing? wanna betray me? heres my back just stab me of course I love you girl but i got time for no games its time you realize that I'm not close to the same as all these lame motherfuckers that been driving your lane so get back to your senses or you'll drive me away I ain't holding no grudge don't let it attach sit with a straight plain face while haters attack peaceful warrior in a world full of half wits go to war with my self breaking every bad habit pedal to floor like I'm in a Mercedes catching every glance but I ain't looking at the ladies Cause I'm preoccupied got you on mind yeah I let you in I hope that its right I can't find the time to contemplate is heartbreak on the way gotta fucking trust or I'll throw it all away call it a fucking must a necessity now im feeling full of glee Cause I got you next to me even when you're distant i think I can feel your energy what a sharp Duality Feeling heat between the sheets I don't think she knows exactly what she does to me feeling like I need a fix yeah I'm feeling greed it's been a long time since I didn't wanna flee just know I'll treat you like a queen if you make me your king

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @jakeadams.7151620, It's time for us to take a look at 'Independent?'! 💥 Great recording quality on this, we can hear you perfectly. 🤙 Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done! Nice use of vocal effects! Helps your track pop! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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