The One

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if she cried a million times then I apologized a million one its no fun baby being alone baby but if you give this love a chance take you by the hand show you real romance before you run baby could be the one maybe some niggas going through it they woman realize they playing games aint going through it said he dont want to get married dont want to go into it but if she see something better trust she gone go and do it understand women require love and affection to try and build a connection you wasnt paying attention when she was given directions now you repeating the lesson sitting and stressing pulling out your phone so you can reread a messege even the hardest dude a cry when alone aint got a woman by his side serving time on his own nobody dropping commissary to put time on his phone when he got out he take the bus nobody driving him home fuck that is the streets really worth it should you be putting in work instead of putting time at home showing a woman she first even god saw the need when putting woman on earth how you supposed to plant a seed if you dont dig in the dirt

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Speedy

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4 years ago

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leonardo

4 years ago

comes together as a complete track Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @angelh.8238, We're gonna review your track 'The One'. Let's get it! Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. The rapping itself here is impeccable, the flows are effortless, smooth and overall super impressive. Rhyme schemes and general lyricism are fire as well, you clearly feel at talking your talk on this kind of beat. Love the subtle Ms Jackson nods too. Just gotta clean up that audio quality! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

4 years ago

keep pushing with that creativity the one was definitely different angel I hope to see you support me and my music Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Zamm

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

The 1 one

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Drastik7

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥