hood rat
don't know why you sitting like you don't care ... you dont have the slightest fucking clue ...what is coming ...but hey its all up to you its yo world ..bit xheck it ..lil girl .you cute sexy and sweet ...betta believe them dudes is bustin they feet ..stalking you like prey.. its a fucking game that they play..trading off for some shard ... come on they tret us lik fucking pokemon cards ..the stat how you act what you do and font do pass it on to the next so they have all the right moves ..no matter how we play ..we lose...do or dont do ..i did it mother fuckin all...it was not a good call...now i know. betterr bit im too consumed with girls like you who are ignorant to their own vanity ...for me it aint insanity im doinh shit over and pver lnowing its going the same way but my gut says to shout out about the illicit secret shit that these dicks do...sepearate and alliante us from each other hopeing like hell no one gets to be or see they mothqqer .q seet so theay may get to fuck her... neat mqeet seethed
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don't know why you sitting like you don't care ... you dont have the slightest fucking clue ...what is coming ...but hey its all up to you its yo world ..bit xheck it ..lil girl .you cute sexy and sweet ...betta believe them dudes is bustin they feet ..stalking you like prey.. its a fucking game that they play..trading off for some shard ... come on they tret us lik fucking pokemon cards ..the stat how you act what you do and font do pass it on to the next so they have all the right moves ..no matter how we play ..we lose...do or dont do ..i did it mother fuckin all...it was not a good call...now i know. betterr bit im too consumed with girls like you who are ignorant to their own vanity ...for me it aint insanity im doinh shit over and pver lnowing its going the same way but my gut says to shout out about the illicit secret shit that these dicks do...sepearate and alliante us from each other hopeing like hell no one gets to be or see they mothqqer .q seet so theay may get to fuck her... neat mqeet seethed
just trying to keep shit real..I am very new to this but I think I'm time I could throw some dope rhymes..much love mad respect!!
smiles mang... sick shit
Hi there @gemeverly, Here's some feedback on your track 'hood rat', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! π Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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