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08 May 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

What's up @cjhanley, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'um'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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