Hey @lilice1,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'lil ice'! ๐ฅ
Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. ๐ง
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! ๐
Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @lilice1, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'lil ice'! ๐ฅ Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. ๐ง Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! ๐ Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hits after hits, your trajectory's nothing but UP! ๐ Strong Bars ๐ช Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ