Hey @bobbycobane,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'jelous', here are our thoughts π₯
We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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thanx I didn't think it was that great...but I guess im my own worst critic....more to come then, stay tuned
Hey @bobbycobane, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'jelous', here are our thoughts π₯ We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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