THA GANGSTALUV'MR.MARQUIE'

2 years ago

ok Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

Can you take the pain

2 years ago

real

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @kevincarroll.6819197, Thank you for sharing 'playin' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: You got great bars here. 🙌 Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎