Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @josephedwards.7131692, Thank you for sharing 'Pavement' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Joseph Edwards

2 years ago

check it I'm here hitting pavement check that Out here collecting payment fix your tone, don't make the wrong statement fix your face, I'm finna rearrange it get snapped back like you're made of latex your style like a snap back lame style, old kicks okay let's put this in perspective your position... it's defective you're.. the last to be selected the first to be rejected the last to be respected what you lose I resurrect it what you aim towards i deflect it put your hands down learn your lesson no skill up in your possession flawless victory, no correction bitch what you thought it was style this hot cause menopause got these bitches breathing heavy call em Santa clause got their gifts already they can watch me walk I got it so easy I don't gotta talk Hop out the whip and watch the ladies flock Jumped up on this beat and made that speaker hop I'm the whole damn reason you can feel your block trunk stay shakin daddy brought the bacon bread up on the table that's some easy takin true story not a fable a billion ways to make it no basic cable Hulu live in my space ship bitch what you thought it was