Hey @debonair_da_great,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'debonair_da_great - Fire we lit'! π₯
The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat is fire, awesome choice. π§¨
The effects you've used make the track stand out, nice job! β
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @debonair_da_great, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'debonair_da_great - Fire we lit'! π₯ The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, awesome choice. 𧨠The effects you've used make the track stand out, nice job! β Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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