Jacob Whaley

these two hands

Jacob Whaley
these two hands

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06 May 2022

hello I'm me you know the me that's always been inside you too hide the real you so you wouldn't get hurt again dirt is what's stains these calloused hands and I don't care what they try to dig out by The Man behind these two hands you don't know I never told me that time has hands and he knew that my dad's time would be well out of his hands he died when I'm just 23 and I don't even know why but I guess God needed another angel to give him some more hands up in hell lol

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2 years ago

Yo @jacobwhaley! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'these two hands'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

hello I'm me you know the me that's always been inside you too hide the real you so you wouldn't get hurt again dirt is what's stains these calloused hands and I don't care what they try to dig out by The Man behind these two hands you don't know I never told me that time has hands and he knew that my dad's time would be well out of his hands he died when I'm just 23 and I don't even know why but I guess God needed another angel to give him some more hands up in hell lol

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